Thursday, January 14, 2010

The beginning of the end

She locked the door from the inside,And sat herself on the edge of the bed.The surface of her palm sweated profusely under the grip of the tiny bottle she was holding.The dark yet the transperant liquid within didnt look tasty.But does taste matter at this moment.
Looking back on her life, She could see only scars. Scars of pain ripped open very too often.
"I hope its all over soon", She mumbled to herself and gulped the contents of the bottle in one draught..
At first, She didnt feel a thing...then with a pang of pain , her throat burnt and her eyes watered as she frantically supressed the urge to throw up...It was the servant maid who was the first to see in the morning..There she lay sprawled on the floor with drools from her mouth as an empty bottle lay rolling a little distance away from her reach..
The previous night was the first time she boozed,... the first shot of tequila.....the finest brand there is . :)

33 comments:

Carpe Diem said...

hehehe..good one..but i guessed it will end like this :P

TheUncanny said...

haha.. ;)

Oh..I forgot i have intelligent readers! :P

HAppy maatu pongal!

lakshmi said...

Hey machs!

Seri kickana post de...
Appa finally good post from u. Ipadi if you start writing, naanga yen di unna kalaika porom... Itha vittutu "God is my BF.. I love Him", "Iam uthami, no cribbing" nu paesina naanga room potu yosichu kalaikirom... :)

lakshmi said...

That too, Jan 14th morning 8 A.M. sucha post...

I like it! one good kudumba kuthuvilaku u are! appreciate it!

chennai girl said...

hey very good one. And very nicely written .....
And the post thavira, i like ur friends comment. Its so lively....;)

satya said...

loved this post...feel free to visit back

Srivats said...

LOL wow thats fantastic u write really well!

gils said...

//gulped the contents of the bottle in one draugh//

athu ennu terila..intha line padicha udanaye unga image came with one saraku baattil :D :D so ending was not a surprise :D :D LOL @ lakshmi's kament :D

Carpe Diem said...

//HAppy maatu pongal!

ya ya nama ellam maadu mathri thaane work panrom .. ;)
Same to you. :P .

TheUncanny said...

@ laks

Thirupi vandhutiya..
Nee praise panriya illa kaalaikiriya nu theriyale...

ennamo, im glad u liked this post atleast..

//good kudumba kuthuvilaku u are! appreciate it!//

Kudumbam, kuthu, vilaku pathi yelam nee pesakudathu... :P

TheUncanny said...

@ chn girl

//And the post thavira, i like ur friends comment. Its so lively....//

Neengalum ma?? u too???[sob][sob]...buhu

TheUncanny said...

@ satya

Thank you,.. :)

TheUncanny said...

@ Srivats..

Thanku thanku thanku..mikka nanri srivats avargale..chennai vanthutu remba busy aiyteenga neenga!! :((

TheUncanny said...

@ gils

//unga image came with one saraku baattil//

Enga, i never said its my story..then how can u imagine me in it that too with a bottle..that too with a saraku bottle...how? how? how?..cha cha...insult!!!! thelam arasiyal vazhkaile sagajam!

TheUncanny said...

@ carpe diem

I dunno, every year...i get very excited for mattu pongal..dunno why!!
edho purva jenma bandham pola!!! hehe

Swetha Guptha said...

gud one!!

kanaguonline said...

enakku kadhai puriyala... :( :(

TheUncanny said...

@ swetha gupta

Thanks! :)

TheUncanny said...

@ kanagu

Ennakum appo appo doubt vaarum,..namba thaan kathaiye ezhuthinomanu... :))))

RamMmm said...

Your post is almost a triple 55er like a triple shot of tequila.

:-) Nejammaa sollunga tequilavai taste pannirukkeengalaa illaya? Or at least dip a finger into the shot glass with tequila and lick it, maybe with salt, illa ellaam kaelvi gnanamaa? :-) Romba nunukkamaa ezhudhiyirukkeenga.

TheUncanny said...

to be frank,

For me,anything remotely close to Tequila wud be having grape juice in pazhamundhir nilayam!!!!!! :D :D :D

RamMmm said...

:-) Tomato juice kudichchadhukkey ivvalavunna, a lick of tequila irundhaa eppdi irundhirukkum. :-)

Good writing.

RamMmm said...

shucks - change the tomato juice above (which I was thinking of) to grape juice. :-) :-)

Aaarti said...

hahaha.Knew it had to be something fun...!!

I still remember my 1st shot of tequila..was in delhi amidst friends..!! :D good fun....
Thanks for visiting!! neat blog u got here

TheUncanny said...

@ RamMmmm
//change the tomato juice above (which I was thinking of) //

haha..LOL!!!! :)

TheUncanny said...

@ Aarthi

Tequila and friends!!..me not so blessed :( yet! ;) ...hehe

Pri said...

hmmm that was scary! :-/

i guess it's enough to put one off tequila shots atleast for a while :p

Srivats said...

busy ellam ellai , vetti dhaan :) nasrivatsan@ gmail , mail pannunga ungay numberai :)

Anjani said...

hi there , thanks for the comment on my blog
btw, nice blog u've got here
cheerio!

Carpe Diem said...

Nice profile pic :)

TheUncanny said...

@ Pri..

scary huh??..its sole intention was that..hehe...

TheUncanny said...

@ Anjani

Thanks for dropping by :)

TheUncanny said...

@ carpe diem

hehe..danks! ;)