Yet another year rolls by,
Yet another year is born on the fly,
Yet another time my heart aches, coz I’m failing.
Yet another time I smile, when I well know I’m falling..
Yet another time tears roll down before I sleep ..
Yet another time I walk lonely in the beach whilst I weep
Coz, yet another time, Im here without you………………
Date: 7th dec 2008
Place : Marina beach
Time:7:00 am
17 comments:
yet another 'feelings' poem...
yet its hard for me to decipher,
is it imagination at work...or am i demented not to empathise..!
hey btw tht was jus a generalised comment..came across quite a few poems lik this on blog hopping...
anyways...Merry Christmas...n best wishes for the Year ahead:)
hey!
I was wanted to write something to go with the pic.......
hehe...so its imagination at work:)
fine..
oh, this is wat u meant by "imagination at work",...hehe...
Anyways, im surprised that u didnt comment on the pic..
th pic is good..er..umm..well i thot it was added to match up with the words in the post..hehe..!
its like a lady walking on water!!so ur creative photoshop work.?!
i agree, on closer look..its not neatly done...actually, that was clicked by my sis, while i was walking towards the sea....it has to undergone heavy editing, to bring it to wat it is...given, the model in the pic is not a professional one ;) hehe
hehe...i agree too..to both the statements above;)
anyways cool work..n imagination..!
hey n drop into 101clicks too...been a while i guess.!
sure man!..actually visit ur blog regularly....
:)glad to know...
anyways..Good day n Happy YeAR End..!
cheers:)
Kavitha,
Just gone through some of your postings.All I ask is "To which School do you belong".The way you put your thoughts into words is damn good.After reading "Chennai-Yil oru...." post I even came to a conclusion that you are damn descriptive in nature in whatever you say like...
"I felt drops of rain now flowing from my forehead down the bridge of my nose and dripping from its tip." ROFL.
Btw nice photoshop work too.
Have a nice weekend,
K.Kiran.
Hi Kiran,
Thanks for those "it makes me fly", compliments...im flying..hehe...
Thanks for dropping by!!!! :)
Happe new year!
nice fotography effect u had on the pic kavitha.....
an the poem more of defines u....but an effort worth appreciating ...creatin a poem from the pic...
a new revelation-- the poetess in you
simple , strong and touchy verses
damn good...
nice pic too
oh and i jus read the comments to know.. its u in the pic
u do look... quite a gr8 modellin for an amateaur model ;)
and gr8 photography by ur sis
//gr8 modellin for an amateaur model//
U made my day archana!!!!! I cant stop smiling!!!! hehehe
@ rahul!!!
yeah, i did struggle alot to come up with something for the pic..but, somehow i end up writing some crap like tat...can't help ;)
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